Conflict Scenario Essay

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Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. NOTE: WritePoint comments are computer-generated writing and grammar suggestions inviting the consideration and analysis of the writer; they are not infallible statements of right/wrong, and they should not be used as grading elements. Also, at present, WritePoint cannot detect quotations or block-quotes, so comments in those areas should be ignored. Please see the other helpful writing resources in the Tutorials and Guides section of the Center for Writing Excellence. Thank you for using WritePoint. Conflict Scenario Jaymolte Bell, Ian Mercier, Sandra Rose MGT/521 September 5, 2011 Pamela Lemons Abstract Just Right Tire Company is working on a new tire tread design for a brand of new tires the company plans to launch in the fall. Jan, Sally, and Mark from the marketing department have been asked to develop an ad to promote the new tires. The three have worked together in the past and have created very successful ads. Jan [If this is an abbreviation for a month, in academic compositions write it out] develops the overall [Wordiness: unless meaning denim work clothes, "overall" is general and vague and contributes little to the sentence] ad ideas, Sally does the graphics and colors, and Marc develops the slogans. On this project, the three of them have not been able to agree on any of the details. Sally has tried to talk the other

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