Cherry Bomb Essay

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Writing Practice for AP Lit Question #2 Here are some examples of writing with potential. Start by identifying the weaknesses in each, then rewrite them. Example One: Thesis: “Author’s use of simplified syntax and idiomatic statements show her point of view” Evidence: (idiomatic speech) “…help-him-out block of ice” Discussion: -“Helps to show age” -“Shows the author’s use of words repeated from adults” Example Two: Thesis: “Through her use of description, simile, and alliteration, Clair explains her vivid memories as a 5th grader.” Evidence: (simile) -“…fine as wine” -“…like a piece of twine” Discussion: -“Time period comparison, gives a feel for author’s time” -“Indicative of what author was familiar with, almost shows what class her family was” Example Three: Thesis: “In Maxine Clair’s excerpt from “Cherry Bomb” the author uses imagery and description to characterize the narrator’s memories of her as a fifth grader in summer” Evidence: (description) -“…we would see him in his fenced-in yard, wooly-headed and bearded, hollering things we dared not repeat…” Discussion: -“Description used to explain how narrator was feeling as a young child and her POV” If you were to discuss imagery here are some things you might choose to use: “Maxine Clair uses _______ imagery in “Cherry Bomb” to characterize her adult memories of her fifth-grade summer world as ______. “Then, if you closed your eyes, held your hands up over your head, placed one foot in front of the other…” “…Eddy had a keloid like a piece of twine down the side of his face…” “…his glass eyes that stared in a fixed angle at the
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