Cause and Effect Essay / Plastic Surgery

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Juney Vasquez Professor Sedita English 101 11 Nov 2011 Student/Teacher Memo possessed 1. What was your purpose? What effect were you trying to achieve? I wanted to write about the effects that the media has on young adults and teen when pertaining to plastic surgery. 2. What was interesting about the process you went through in writing this paper, and what did you learn from it? I was surprised to find how many teens go under the knife not only because of the media but because of parental influence. 3. What was the most difficult aspect about this paper, and what did you learn from the attempt? The most difficult part was being able to find testimonials of tees that would admit to having been influence by the media. 4. What do you see as the strengths of the paper, and what would you try to do if you were to revise it some more? I believe the essays strength is that I was able to transition from paragraph to paragraph in a comprehensive manner. The weakness would be the conclusion or the closing paragraph. I wasn’t sure how to end the essay. 5. What’s not a part of your paper that you think might help a reader understand or appreciate it more? What didn’t you put in? I don’t understand this question clearly. 6. What kind of grammar or formatting feedback would you like from your instructor? I would like to know how the essay reads over all. 7. When using the APUS Online Library article databases, did you evaluate the credibility of the sources you chose? yes 8. Are your memo and essay in correct MLA format? yes 9. Did you save your file using your last name and the name of the assignment? yes 10. Are you free from contractions? Are you in the correct person? Never ever use second person ("you," "your," "yourself," etc.) in formal writing. yes Juney Vasquez Professor Sedita English 101 3 Dec 2011 Cosmetic Surgery: A Personal Decision or a

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