Blackberry Picking Commentary

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Muffin Patrick Blackberry Picking Commentary English III 5AB 11 April 2014 The Lust of Blackberries “Blackberry Picking” tells the story of a young boy’s love and lust for blackberry season. Each year the speaker gets very excited when the blackberry season starts, but then becomes depressed when the season and magic ends. The poem begins with a description of the perfect conditions for blackberries to ripen. The speaker goes into the different stages of a blackberry ripening by using color imagery. From there, the speaker compares the sweet flesh of the first blackberry to thickened wine and summer’s blood. In summer you feel alive and blood always rushes. Seamus Heaney uses deadly sin imagery to describe the taste for the blackberries. He speaks of lust to describe his extreme wanting for the blackberries. In the first stanza, the speaker describes the picking of the blackberries by using injury and suffering imagery. He uses words such as “briars scratched and wet grass bleached our boots”, “our hands peppered with thorn pricks”, and “our palms sticky as Bluebeard’s”(10-16). These descriptions of Heaney’s hard painful work show the reader how much he suffered and went through to have a taste of the summer blackberries. Bluebeard, said to be a pirate, steals treasure and other things important to a pirate. The speaker uses the illusion of Bluebeard to represent that the speaker took every blackberry in sight. The second stanza presents a much more depressed mood to the poem. The blackberries begin to go bad and the magic of the season begins to fade. In the first line of the second stanza, “We hoarded the fresh berries in the byre”, the word hoarded shows the first attempt to hold on to what he knows will not stay (17). The speaker comes to fact that the berries’ freshness does not last forever. He begins to speak of a “rat-gray fungus” that starts
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