Betsy Shaw's Argument

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Evaluate the support used in a text 1) Relevance and/or consistency There is relevancy of Betsy Shaw’s argument .First argument is relevance. The author provides relevant supporting points which consist of facts and report according to Guardian UK- The detail and exact location of baby hatch in Malaysia-Report according to Malaysia’s newspaper. The second argument is relevant which Baby boxes or also called as baby hatches can violate the rights of the babies. Betsy Shaw has highlighted about the rights of the babies should be protected under the UN Committee on the Rights of the Child. In the third argument which is baby hatch can prevent the infanticide. This point is relevant to support the argument as it is based on the Guardian…show more content…
The author try to be neutral but the words given are sound fishy and more to not support the baby hatches. 3) Completeness Incomplete.-Author did not sum up all points to make it clear for reader.- There is lack of certain information to the arguments made. 4) Validity and credibility First argument shows validity and credibility.- Author provides fact and report according to Guardian UK,-Details and exact location of one example of baby hatch in Malaysia-Report about baby hatches based on Malaysia’s newspaper. Second argument does show validity and credibility.-Author seems to use the right in the UN Committee on the Rights of the Child which is liable and of course valid. Third argument is validity and credibility.- Author used the right of children according to the UNCRC which is a strong evidence and fact to support the argument. it is based on the Guardian interviewed expert opinion, Maria Herczog who is a member of the UNCRC towards the issue that baby hatches cannot prevent infanticide. 5) Make inferences and draw
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