A Rhetorical Analysis Of Nicolas Carr's 'The Shallows'

1063 Words5 Pages
Brad Long Professor Zlatkin English 291-04 Essay #1- Rhetorical Analysis 10 September 2013 Evolution of Man and Technology: Old vs. Young In Nicolas Carr’s The Shallows: What the Internet is Doing to our Brain’s, he borrows a quote from Marshall McLuhan stating: “We are approaching ‘the technological stimulation of consciousness, when the creative process of knowing will be collectively and corporately extended to the whole of human society’” (McLuhan qtd. Carr1). This means that with all the technological advances, anyone who wanted to know information about something, get it within seconds. It’s not a hard process anymore; before if someone wanted to look something up they would have to do a significant amount of research. These…show more content…
Mcluhan states that “people naturally get caught up in the information” (McLuhan qtd. Carr 2). This is evident with Nicolas Carr as he finds himself evolving into the technological world. Even when he is away from the computer he describes himself wanting to check his email, Google something, or even click on some links. Carr states “Just as Microsoft Word had turned me into a flesh-and-blood word processor, the Internet, I sensed was turning me into something like a high-speed data processing machine, a human HAL. I missed my old brain” (Carr…show more content…
Usually when a new piece of technology comes out, it is easily picked up and known how to use because of the previous technology that was in its place has just been upgraded. The older generation has to learn all of this from scratch. They weren’t born into the world we know today where it is a given that we know how to use a computer or a cell phone correctly. This is why Carr can make such a good argument for his own generation. Therefore, it can definitely change the way their brains work because it could make something that they have been doing for a long time one way, and completely changing the way they do it the next day. In conclusion, Carr doesn’t write a successful argument about how technology is changing our brains. This is because he uses several of his own experiences to describe how we should believe his point of view. He tries to drive the reader to understand from his point of view, and you can’t do that because the reader may or may not be able to relate. Therefore his argument is stale and
Open Document