The Ideal Mate

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English Composition 1 Essay Writing Illustration/ Example Essay Plan Thesis Statement: For me the ideal mate should posses many fine qualities. I. Should have a great personality. A. Makes me smile and happy. B. Has a great personality. II. Must be dependable. A. Be able to get things done. B. Helps around the home. (eg. Cleaning car does shopping etc.) III. Must be attractive. A. Must be handsome but not conceited or vain. B. Must practice good eating habits, exercise regular to be fit. C. Must not be a smoker. D. Can be a social drinker but not abuser. IV. Must be responsible and mature. A. Be proactive and help around. B. Must pick up the slack and be the head of the home. C. Must take initiative. V. He should be loyal honest and trustworthy. A. Someone I can trust wholeheartedly. B. Be open minded. C. Be able to communicate and have meaningful conversations. D. Agree to disagree. E. Must be faithful and not cheat. VI. Should be family orientated and be open to commitment/marriage. A. Be ready to have a family. B. Have children. VII. He should be loving caring and humble. A. Loves me unconditionally with my flaws and when I make mistakes. B. Remind how much he loves and adores me. C. Be a relationship we build together. Illustration Essay: The ideal Mate “A good man is hard to find”, this is what I use to say in the beginning. These days, it’s difficult to fall in love and be happy with who has your best interest at heart. Nowadays, young men prefer to be hanging around the blocks or partying and drinking in bars instead of taking care of their women and home. Where have all the good men gone? For me, the ideal mate should posses many fine qualities. First of all he should have a great personality. Someone who makes me smile and make

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