Surfacing Loneliness in Raymond Carver’s I Could See the Smallest Things a Close Reading

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In Raymond Carver’s I Could See the Smallest Things, we are presented the world, relationships, and thoughts through Nancy’s perspective—literally, in her shoes. Rather than having an unknown narrator illuminate the details of the story, we live through Nancy. Carver’s deliberate writing style — first person, symbolism, and rather straightforward short sentences, which not only create the main character’s tense, and anxious appearance, but bring to life vulnerability, the fear of unknown, and loss — are what illuminate the theme of loneliness. From the very first sentence—“I was in bed when I heard the gate”—we are already beginning to be exposed to the main character’s unnecessarily extreme observance of her surroundings. Carver’s writing style is very straight to the point, “I listened carefully. I didn’t hear anything else.” (As opposed to, “I listened very carefully, though I didn’t hear anything else”). There is very minimal use of adverbs and adjectives, and most sentences that could be long, are in cut with a period. Carver’s use of quick, short sentences gives us a sense of how the character’s mind runs, and with the second half of the paragraph, “There was light enough so that I could see everything in the yard—lawn chairs, the willow tree, clothesline strung between the poles, the petunias, the fences, the gate standing wide open,” we are introduced to a mind that is seemingly being flooded with incoming thoughts. The way her thoughts are narrated is akin to a list. There are no adjectives, or adverbs, once again. This gives us a sense of how restless, and anxious the character must be. The sole purpose of the main character’s anxiousness is assumed to be the fact that the gate is open—“I listened. Then I went back to bed. But I couldn’t get to sleep. I kept turning over. I thought about the gate standing open. It was like a dare”—which is what makes her
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