Critiquing an Essay with George Orwell’s six rules In Orwell’s essay he states that it is easy to slip into the bad writing that people have become accustomed to. It is difficult to go against the temptation of using the easy way out with meaningless words or hackneyed phrases that make things easier and require less thought. Orwell concludes that the progressive decline of the English language is reversible and he offers six rules which can help avoid most of the errors in poor writing. In Brenda Chow’s essay The Writer at Work, she breaks many of the six rules that Orwell wrote to avoid the continuation of our language decline. Chow breaks the following 3 rules: never use a long word when a short one will do, never use a simile, metaphor, or other figure of speech which you are seeing in print, and never use a foreign phrase, a scientific or jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
One month after the billing period if there's any outstanding balances the medical workplace will monitor the overdue invoice by utilizing the aging statement. A computerized notice notification will probably be released and another billing report will probably be dispatched to the patient by mail. When these methods are ineffective in determining the substantial invoice the following is for the collection expert to phone the patient in regards to the delinquent bill. The collection expert should phone the patient a minimum of once each day and leave at least 3 messages to the patient weekly. The collection expert shouldn't phone a patient regarding a balance before 8a.m.
Had not time to get ears for police. Thanks for keeping last letter back till I got to work again. JACK THE RIPPER The third and most horrendous letter of all was posted two weeks later to Mr. Lusk, head of the Whitechapel Vigilance Committee. With it came a small bow containing part of Catherine Eddowes' kidney. The letter was appropriately addressed "From Hell."
| Can lead to spontaneous responses.No permanent record of it. | Written Communication | Message can be revised several times before being released.Receiver has more time to analyze the message.Message remains the same even after it is relayed to others.Message becomes a permanent record that can be saved. | Sender has no control over message after it is released.Sender lacks immediate feedback.Receiver may not understand parts of
According to Vonnegut , you should fine the subject that you care about In which you in your heart feel other should be care about. This is natural caring which will be the most interesting and teased element; don’t ramble, we may not discuss too widespread because it will make a paragraph out of focus; keep it simple, use simple language in order to the reader easy to understand what you mean; have guts to cut, If a sentence no matter how excellent, don’t afraid to scratch the sentence out if it doesn’t support the subject that you talk about; sound like yourself, no matter what your first language you should treasure it all your life; say what you mean to say, select the most effective words ,and relating words to one another unambiguously; pity the reader , they have to be able to identify thousand of little mark paper and make sense of them immediately; In addition , there are several elements are considered in order to make style in writing , they are :
Referendums cannot be used to make a decision of immediate necessity as it takes weeks and sometimes months to come up with a final decision. If there is low turnout, the referendum process becomes ineffective. Its results will not be a true reflection of the will of the people. If it is binding it will lead to ineffective and flawed laws and public policies. Handing over the responsibility of making and amending laws to politically inept i.e.
Here he uses himself as an example to explain difficulties on communication, Malcolm X says that “I not only wasn’t articulate, I wasn’t even functional” (Chaffee, 2012 p. 18) it was not about inability to speak, but he was not coherent enough to be understood or to achieve what he wanted. To explain the differences between oral and written expression professionally, I could say that written communication is one of the two main types of communication, along with oral/spoken communication. In one hand, I believe that written communication is formal and courteous and according to Reference for Business site (2011) … One advantage is that written messages do not have to be delivered on the spur of the moment; instead, they can be edited and revised several times before they are sent so that the content can be shaped to maximum effect. Another advantage is that written communication provides a permanent record of the messages that have been sent and can be saved… For these reasons, written forms of communication are often considered more appropriate… (5th paragraph) with this I can support that it provide common benefits for sender and receiver in the communication process, to “improve efficiency” by avoiding interference or misunderstands. But it can also be impersonal, where people may not always read them and there is no immediate feedback.
When one reads just for the sake of reading, they don’t have interest and won’t be thinking about how the literature might actually connect with their own life and interests. Usually if a person doesn’t connect or have interest in the literature, they don’t realize how they can relate their own life to the piece and get useful knowledge. Bloom also emphasizes how important reading for personal interest is. “Ultimately we read…in order to strengthen the self, and to learn its authentic interests” (Bloom 2). Reading solely affects the reader.
Congress continually attends meetings until a federal budget bill is created. However, if the bill is taking a longer time than expected, congress will then propose a “continuing resolution” (Q&A). Although continuing resolutions are not terminating the government shutdown or the chances of another, they do give congress a short period of time to continue working on an appropriation bill to propose to the president (Q&A). This is a big help to avoid many shutdowns from happening. In extreme cases, a continuing resolution can be used for up to a year if needed.
On the other hand in a political speech you would not find these as they have prepared the speech and learnt it ahead of the speech they are giving. There would be no hesitation to what they were saying. However you may find pauses in both types of speech but for different reasons. In a political speech pauses may be used for effect, to keep the audience interested. Whereas pauses might be used in a casual speech to give the speaker time to think about what they are saying.