Rising five analysis

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Rising Five The poet talks about growing up, and how people are always looking forward to what life has ahead, but in the process they forget the present. The poem describes how people face the different stages in life, and the transition from one to the other. The persona used is a boy, who the poet uses to expiate himself. Through this poem, the poet is basically questioning peoples need to keep going ahead, without cherishing what we have in the present. The poet is probably trying to sensitize the readers towards life. The poet starts with the description of a boy, who claims to be “rising five, not four”. Here one can see that the boy is eager to grow up, and is thrilled by the fact that he is slowly becoming more mature. His “little coils of hair un-clicked themselves”. Here onomatopoeia has been used, where the poet says “un-clicked”. His spectacles are “brimful of eyes to stare”, again emphasizing on how excited the boy is to grow up, learn new things and see more of the world. “He had been alive 56 months or perhaps a week more”. Here the poet makes the boy sound much older, as he says 56 months instead of saying almost five years. This again shows how desperately the boy wants to grow. The repetition of the line “not four, rising five” again stresses on the attitude of most people who are always thinking about the future. Then the poet goes on to compare this growth, to nature, with the “cells of spring/ bubbled and doubled, buds unbuttoned” Here the poet effectively describes the growth of trees and plants, and how from a tiny cell they turn into beautiful blossoming flowers. Assonance has been used in the words “bubbled and doubled” and alliteration is used where the poet says “buds unbuttoned”. These techniques help create a vivid image of the beautiful trees that “swilled with green” and “the forming of the fruit”. “Not may but rising June”.
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