Glasgow 5Th March

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Glasgow 5th March, Ashley Baillie. "Glasgow 5th march is a poem about a shocking crime commited on a "young man and his girl" by two youths. The poem is written by Edwin Morgan. He makes the poem very realistic almost as if he were watching the attack himself. The title also makes it realistic by using the specific date "5th March." The title implies some kind of police report or newspaper article,its almost like its included in the poem and sets the scene. Throughout the poem Morgan uses many techniques. In the very first lines of the poem he uses onomatopia, It starts with a description of broken window glass: "with ragged dimond of shatterd plate glass" The word shatterd is used to help us visualise the glass breaking and it also tells us what kind of noise it would have made when it broke. By doing this he gives us the description of the glass breaking into tiny peices and exactly what it would of sounded like. One of the reasons i found the poem so succesfull was the poets handling of the victims injuries. Morgan describes the injuries in a way that makes them vivid in the readers mind, he describles the young mans face as: "bristling with fragements of glass" The word "bristling" is another example of onomatopia,it describes the glass sticking in his face,like stubble. The writer buils up tension by telling us about the boys injuries first. "the girls leg has caught on the broken
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