He also uses a variety of sources, ranging from political to economical, religious, and even psychological texts, making his essay trustworthy and credible. In regards to the topic itself, after reading Orwell’s essay, I believe language is failing due to our generation tendencies. Language is political from top to bottom. It is deviated from its original purpose, to simplify communication. It’s become a political matter.
Reflection is necessary, for we must see the sentence as a whole. She seems to be contradicting herself, but this is not so. We had just taken it for granted that she would finish the sentence the way we expected it to be finished. Our expectations built in the first part of the sentence are disappointed. But the change in tone, though seemingly sudden, is a natural conclusion to the author's own train of thought.
The novel takes this theme much further and delves deeper to show us the result that first impressions can make on Jane Austen’s characters. Yes, it is easy to find the first impressions about the characters through the first few chapters, but the author also wants to show us the effects of those impressions on the individual character, which shows us the prejudices of the characters. Hence, the new and better suited name of the novel Pride & Prejudice. The author fluently characterizes the deficiencies of Mr. Darcy who displays his “pride" at the beginning of the
The haiku can relate to the possible isolation of the reader as it does not have enough lines and syllables to specifically describe who the character in the poem is. Furthermore because the poem is written in first person, it seems like the character does not want to give too much information on themselves. This adds to the loneliness and sadness the theme isolation can illustrate.|| With the generous permission of Lou
The reason why I had three very good pieces of evidence was because they all showed that Stacy believed that she was being treated unfairly. My conclusion had a brief short summary of my paper and I restated my thesis statement. Although there are many things I did well, there are many things I could work on. I did not have a clear thesis so my body paragraphs lack focus. Having a clear thesis would help me show that I understood the story better.
However, that paragraph makes his argument weak because the author did not explain his dislike of the electronic voices and how it is connected with the argument. His ending of the article is awkward. Although I understand that the automated voice system irritates him, there is no further explanation of why the transit is no longer close and personal. He should have added more evidences to the article. First, he could talk about the rush hour train.
The research paper was very informative as well as persuasive. He used his knowledge and information to persuade the readers, and it certainly worked on me. Zimmerman’s use of ethos worked very well. He used many different sources to show that he knew what he was talking about. There were examples from The New York Times, different runner’s magazines, and quotes from a multitude of impressive people.
Also, the video seemed easier to interpret and follow along with, as the written version required rereading for greater comprehension. The video was entertainment still, which this viewer believes is at least in part a test of good writing. One could not watch it, without feeling the anguish Woolf felt at being suppressed where she so much wanted to grow. That sympathy is what effects people to support her
Despite the many benefits of affectionate communication, which is desired by many, it can also produce not just positive outcomes but negative ones as well. In an article, Affectionate Communication is Good, Except When it Isn’t: On the Dark Side of Expressing Affection, written by Kory Floyd and Perry M. Pauley, the authors explored the contradiction of affectionate communication. After understanding some of the reasons why affectionate behavior might be positive, I also analyzed the negative aspects of affectionate communication. Authors Floyd and Pauly discussed potential problems of receiving affectionate expressions, which captured my interest in the topic relating to my own personal experience. In my opinion, one of the greatest feelings in any relationship is feeling loved and appreciated by the other person.
What I did differently in this essay as opposed to my first, I stopped over analyzing. I drove myself crazy on my last paper trying to make myself sound like I cared about what I was writing, and even to make it sound a little more educated. In hindsight, I should have just written it in a “dumbed down” version and then later changed what I thought would have worked better. For this paper, I just kept writing, and didn’t over analyze anything. In all honesty, I was shocked at the good feedback a received because I felt like I hadn’t made it anything special.