Communication Breakdown Essay

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Name : Nguyen Loc Student ID : L9921920 Date : December 10th , 2012 Communication Breakdown Modern communication has been strongly prevalent than ever before. As the emergence of social network sites and mobile phone revolution, modern communication has brought a huge wave of benefits to meet people's demand. In the article “ Communication Breakdown”, published in the London Telegraph, 15th August 2011, Wanda Wright has a different perspective that modern communication itself leads to countless negative effects. This essay will critically response to the author's idea. In general, the author provides two primary problems of modern communication. Firstly, the author elaborates that due to the appearance of social network sites e.g Facebook or Twitter, slang and abbreviations are widely used by young people. As a consequence, meaningless sentences are being continuously exchanged. Furthermore, Wright warns that peoples' verbal and social skills will be threatened because of excessive reliance on modern communication. Firstly, although it might be true that meaningless sentences result from the habit of using abbreviations, what the author fails to mention is that because of the abbreviations, much more information is transferred just in one message. Furthermore, due to the innovation of cellphone and social media, people now can access to huge range of symbols and icons, which can be added to their messages so as to make it more lively and more beautiful. Moreover, thanks to Facebook and other social websites, customers can provide suggestion or showing their appreciation about products via the company's Facebook account. The author is biased when just giving ideas on the disadvantages of modern communication. The benefits that it brings to society are more than just the disadvantages. The
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