Dear Derrick, To start off I really loved this essay! From the beginning to the end you gave me life. Confidence looks really good on you. I like how you have so much logic for being homosexual and that’s very good because half of these kids walking around this campus can’t give two sentences of why there “gay”, I honestly think most just do it for attention and because there confused, but who am I to judge? You related your essay to a book and I thought that was a very safe move because the outcome of it was amazing might I say.
In the main character, Dennis’s voice. To my opinion I really enjoyed the novel I have read. Pete Hauntman is way of writing really catches your intention, and keeps me on the edge of me seat. Though I wished he included more ways for the character to overcome his addiction. Hautman's writing style is quite straight-forward, occasionally humorous, and attention-grabbing.
But other than that I have really loved this book mainly because of the mystery behind the story. I couldn’t let the book down since I started reading it. It puts you at the edge of your seat which made me love it so much. I would rate this book a 10 out of 10. I also liked one quote from this novel “That’s what being crazy was, wasn’t it?
With this respect comes a stronger conscience as well as greater morals. Diving deep into ideas on how to earn the idea of respect really emphasized the solution to the whole problem association with young adults and the increase in problems with them. Metaphors can be a great way to simplify a complicated subject to enable a wider variety of audiences to understand it more thoroughly, which essentially leads to greater enjoyment of the reading. A great example of using a metaphor to allow the reader to understand better is when the author states “It is an island apart, striving to maintain itself in a sea of change.” (pg 391). This is referring to how the household is not connected with the outer world and is therefore isolated from any interactions.
John Steinbeck made the plot interesting and the themes behind the work were truly brilliant. The book had its points were they were very descriptive but didn’t keep me interested enough. Reading through those boring parts is completely worth it though. Steinbeck makes the book easy to understand and i like that quality a lot about this book. In my opinion, I got the idea that this book was written more for the workings of the mind but at the same time Steinbeck wanted to make you feel something as you read this.
Without Slim, John Steinbeck's book would not have had the same effect. He gave the reader of the book the idea of a king. Slim was caring, understanding, and a great leader. Slim's best characteristic was how he always thought of people. From the beginning, Slim was very nice Lennie and George .
No one should be hated because of where they are from or what they look like. I can somewhat relate to this novel in the family and school sort of way. I have a very loving family (not a mean dad), and my school experience is and will be a lot like Francisco’s. I am planning on going through high school and college, just like Francisco. Both books were interesting and inspiring to read, and it was fun to learn about Parvana and Francisco’s
taking my family, my home, my faith, and my young innocense. I forgive you, in a way i'm immuned to evilness. Look a little into my life, possibly read my best selling book. As you can clearly see, I have used your evilness to craft a genius work of art. I have used you, to write a book so marvelous, that i have earned myself the prestigous award; the nobel peice prize.
These were the little statements such as “Sorry weirdos-I love you, but she has a point.” or, “Sadly, I couldn’t get anyone to connect with me-for some reason, nobody wanted me to track their every movement?” These are small humorous additions to the story that without them the story is still great but with them it keeps the reader wanting to read more and even though small, they are a large help to Honan’s story and he does a nice job of adding them in places they fit and not just throwing them in randomly throughout his writing. In conclusion, Mathew Honan does a lot of things right when righting this story, He makes a few mistakes like including too much of his personal life and telling the world that his wife will be home alone for a week, but what he does right including making himself relevant in the beginning of the story, using his personal experiences Hale 4 effectively and making the reader want to read more, and I definitely believe that the things Honan does right in the story without a doubt trump the things he did not do right. No one can write a perfect story, there will always be small changes that could take place, but Mathew Honan did a wonderful job with his essay “I Am Here”. It was not only informational; it told a story and was even funny and quirky at times. He certainly wrote a story that kept the reader reading and I would say that is what is most
But they found many activities and ways of entertainment that helped them to overcome their isolation, loneliness and discomfort. One of the best distractions was reading. More than hundred years ago, in time of no television, books meant more, than we could imagine. People were looking forward to the time, when they