Black Men and Public Space

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Brent Staples opens his essay “Just Walk on By: Black Men and Public Spaces” provocatively to make a point through example. Upon reading “my first victim was a woman—white, well dressed, probably in her early twenties,” many will conclude that Staples assaulted the woman. After reading and learning similar assumptions made about Staples based on his race, readers may feel sheepish about their prior thoughts (Staples 404). Staples’s ironic, bitter tone demonstrates that he wants their guilt to stay with them, keeping them from judging as quickly in the future. Many could argue they could not possibly have judged Staples’ race in just the first sentence since he never once describes himself. Instead, their bias could sprout from the word “victim’s” negative connotation. However, Staples’s carefully chosen words announce his race even if he never says “black” or “African American”. Staples labels the woman “white”, thereby labeling himself in the process. Using common language people do not call someone of similar race by their color. Knowing this, readers instinctively color Staples black. This single, subtle word gives the essay’s example judgments more impact; like the readers, the people judging Staples most likely unconsciously act racist. Staples describes each past incident with an ironic tone, emphasizing such occurrences’ frequency and his displeasure toward them. He uses each example of his “ability to alter space in ugly ways” nonchalantly as though it happens every day (Staples 405). One instance even starts, “one day, rushing into the office building […],” like many common, ordinary stories do (Staples 406). Half expecting a casual story to follow such a typical beginning, readers may be shocked when he says the office manager mistook him for a burglar and called the police. Such incidents show sharp contrast between Staples’ casual words and his apparent

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